haiku challenge
Challenge: write a haiku involving sakura blossoms and death.
So far we have...
hsifyppah: Sakura-gazing / My mouth agape with wonder / I choke on blossoms
gfish: Drifting with the flow / Gently lodged in constriction / Bam! Sakurastroke!
hsifyppah: Sakura blossoms / Tickle my constricting throat / Anaphylaxis
gfish: Transient beauty / Passing swiftly through my head / At point nine nine c
hsifyppah :Delicate petals / Fill my heart and my spirit / And my alveoli
So far we have...

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aimless on a saturday
did not see the train
(sakuragicho)
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I watch the blooms come in spring
My time is ending
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delicate flowers
should not be viewed during
a grand lightning storm
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lovely pink petals
rain down upon my body
and also the trunks
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And the tree along with them
Onto my car. Fuck!
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Petals cloud my eyes into
Hushed oblivion
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Down towards my head with great
Local gravity
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I take no notice of them
In my hunt for brains
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a hundred children choke on
sakura mochi
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White Sakura in black silk
not see cliff, fall, and die
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I left them on your grave. Shit!
Shouldn't have worn heels.
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two samurai enter but
one samurai leaves
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alveoli
Re: alveoli