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gfish ([personal profile] gfish) wrote2008-12-08 02:12 pm

haiku challenge

Challenge: write a haiku involving sakura blossoms and death.

So far we have...

[livejournal.com profile] hsifyppah: Sakura-gazing / My mouth agape with wonder / I choke on blossoms

[livejournal.com profile] gfish: Drifting with the flow / Gently lodged in constriction / Bam! Sakurastroke!

[livejournal.com profile] hsifyppah: Sakura blossoms / Tickle my constricting throat / Anaphylaxis

[livejournal.com profile] gfish: Transient beauty / Passing swiftly through my head / At point nine nine c

[livejournal.com profile] hsifyppah :Delicate petals / Fill my heart and my spirit / And my alveoli
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[personal profile] solarbird 2008-12-08 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
sakuragiho
aimless on a saturday
did not see the train

(sakuragicho)

[identity profile] niac.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Time Passes Always
I watch the blooms come in spring
My time is ending

[identity profile] neuro42.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)

delicate flowers
should not be viewed during
a grand lightning storm

[identity profile] neuro42.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)

lovely pink petals
rain down upon my body
and also the trunks

[identity profile] hsifyppah.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Hee hee hee.

[identity profile] catamorphism.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Cherry blossoms fall
And the tree along with them
Onto my car. Fuck!

[identity profile] adularia.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Twirling in the breeze
Petals cloud my eyes into
Hushed oblivion

[identity profile] morinon.livejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Falling from the trees
Down towards my head with great
Local gravity

[identity profile] keystricken.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Cherry blossoms swirl
I take no notice of them
In my hunt for brains

[identity profile] novalis.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Every new year
a hundred children choke on
sakura mochi

[identity profile] carmiel.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
Star gazing beauty
White Sakura in black silk
not see cliff, fall, and die

[identity profile] kelsiarei.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Sakura blossoms
I left them on your grave. Shit!
Shouldn't have worn heels.

[identity profile] stolen-tea.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
as the blossoms fall
two samurai enter but
one samurai leaves

[identity profile] adularia.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*glee*

alveoli

[identity profile] bigbumble.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
So how many syllables does "alveoli" have anyway?

Re: alveoli

[identity profile] mathochist.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Four.