haiku challenge

[gfish]

Challenge: write a haiku involving sakura blossoms and death.

So far we have...

hsifyppah: Sakura-gazing / My mouth agape with wonder / I choke on blossoms

gfish: Drifting with the flow / Gently lodged in constriction / Bam! Sakurastroke!

hsifyppah: Sakura blossoms / Tickle my constricting throat / Anaphylaxis

gfish: Transient beauty / Passing swiftly through my head / At point nine nine c

hsifyppah :Delicate petals / Fill my heart and my spirit / And my alveoli

Comments

[neuro42.livejournal.com]

delicate flowers
should not be viewed during
a grand lightning storm

[neuro42.livejournal.com]

lovely pink petals
rain down upon my body
and also the trunks

[hsifyppah.livejournal.com]

Hee hee hee.