Also, pardon the video linkage, but this Discovery Channel promo makes me happily weepy. If people can make money promoting a worldview like that, maybe we aren't completely screwed.
I would make three changes: 1.) break "It kinda makes you wanna... ...break into song?" into two lines, since there are two speakers. 2.) for "grey whales", I hear "great whites" (and that does appear to be a shark, not a whale, in the image) 3.) for "I love to come fast", while it sounds ambiguous, I think it's "I love to go fast", which would also make more sense.
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I would make three changes:
1.) break "It kinda makes you wanna...
...break into song?" into two lines, since there are two speakers.
2.) for "grey whales", I hear "great whites" (and that does appear to be a shark, not a whale, in the image)
3.) for "I love to come fast", while it sounds ambiguous, I think it's "I love to go fast", which would also make more sense.